navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » Make it Alright
Open Poetry #41
Post A Reply Post New Topic Make it Alright Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
hunnie_girl
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-11-09 08:50 PM


It's only time before he will see
the honest truth I see in me
I know it's going to hurt him a lot
and I'll feel bad knowing all that he bought

But I just can't stay involved with one guy
yet I also can't help but want to try
maybe i'll get over it and want to be true
instead of always looking for something new

Yes it's fun at least for awhile
but he's the only one that makes me smile
and I want to be the girl he thinks I can be
I really don't know how he can see past me

My cheating and lies have to change
My life is rebuliding it'll rearrange
'cos I want to be the one he thinks I am at night
While I still have the chance to make it alright


© Copyright 2007 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-11-10 02:27 AM


quote:
Yes it's fun at least for awhile
but he's the only one that makes me smile
and I want to be the girl he thinks I can be
I really don't know how he can see past me



A beautiful intention and I am sure you can "make it alright".

Love,
Margherita

Gumpy
Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143
Canada
2 posted 2007-11-10 06:33 AM


I liked the poem....
They say "the grass is always greener"...
How can you tell when your blinded with sadness for the one you've left behind?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-11-10 12:51 PM


Nice writing...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-11-10 11:02 PM


Krysti... nice flow to your words here.. if you want to change then I know you can do it ...     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » Make it Alright

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary