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When February Lowers Her Eyes...
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When February Lowers Her Eyes... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Blue feathers laugh in crevices where the cornflowers grow, On a path of navy night, the world turning slow. Waltzing to a whispering sea faceted in light, azure arms softly croon of finger tip delight, Remember ancient melodies strumming heart's design, wordless turquoise memories float a shadowed mind. Where denim is the question, the answer, satin hue, pockets full of falling stars, caught in diamond blue. KL Influences of Kaibab's pen again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This one is liking me....  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
LOL...me too, that man's poetry makes my head spin!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FirstClassKlassyLassy~ This is exquisite~ I am loving the all of it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved the sound of this, delightful writing...and loaded with wonderful visuals.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
... and February has never lowered her eyes in a more lovely ~ and 'coquetish' ~ manner. Spell-binding and deliciously surreal.  Your ink is high octane! lol Love to you, Klassy One! Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this one is loving me and I am loving it right back amazing work IWIHWT  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
pockets full of falling stars, caught in diamond blue. This is MUSIC! And the reader can dance along ... on the waves of emotion you create. Awesome. Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Marge, So happy to see you ...and that you enjoyed this. The graphics that should go with this trees silhouetted against a night sea and illumined clouds in shades of blue with falling stars. Perfect for a coastie like me... Huggles! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lee J, I'm so sorry for your recent loss. I'd been away for quite some time, but I always look for you when I can log in. Your poetry is always stunning, and I'm deligted to leave you smiling with my flights of fancy. Thank you.  ~ Karen |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
James, merci! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Hmm! High Octane? Like in combustible? LOL Thanks, Sweetie! Those falling stars are pretty hot.  His poem spoke of "eyes lower than the second moon," thus my title. love you, too Karen |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lady you make me smile, along with Sunshine's response. So glad to you caught a couple of stars, too. KL |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
We should dance at every opportunity! Even if it's only in words for me. Poetry often feels like music to me, but I've realized in my non-poetic family that it takes another poet to hear it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. *sun* KL |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Real class this one Klassy Lassy I really enjoyed it Keep up the good work. Lindsay |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
My favorite colors all mixed to gather to create a certain heaven here. Great poem, Klassy. *hugs*....jo |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lindsay.... A little magic of color and light. I was just thinking how close the stars seem sometimes and how little I dare to wish on one. So when I do, I get carried away. I'm glad you liked it. Back to earth!....  Thank you. ~Karen |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Hugs! Shades of blue?! Lovely. It's so good to know you are still here. I'm so smiling to see you here,Jo. ~ Karen |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I needed this RIGHT NOW! Thank you. Beautiful. - Owl |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Be blessed! ~ K |
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