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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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mistress of ladytree perhaps you are an ocean that ebbs your lovely there at the edge of my horizon perhaps a goddess in bronze that reflects the morning sun and melds the windows of my eyes into a statue's gazing the poet of my mind in dream wears your moments in fantasy and I realize the fantasy is mine as is the dreaming but still you are that ocean that I hurry to view on the dawn whose voice of waves I crave when the evenings fold to night not to posses the gem of your tides but just to worship for moments as you stir the grains of my shore into a longing for longer storms that more of me might be captured _______ daark |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"perhaps a goddess in bronze that reflects the morning sun and melds the windows of my eyes into a statue's gazing" ~ DS, I do believe that you can now add sculptor to your list of talents.   EA ~ a fan of all you artistic expressions. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ea, humble thanks lady friend.. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*SIGHS* wow D... this is so completely beautiful... and very touching.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Time is slowly becoming mine again just as the leaves are falling gently into the keep of winter... I will have more time to sigh soon.... and enjoy the warmth your poetry evokes... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: how utterly beautiful, dear D.! One to tuck away, one that would enchant the world if it was given a chance to read it ... Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my.... beautiful Mr Daark... exquisite! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thank you lady for the eyes ___________ ms sun, the beach misses your warm...am glad you are back _____________ ms mar, thank you lady friend for the eyes ____________ ms R & B thanks to you down under there |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful just beautiful |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick, thanks babe!! |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Beautifully written!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks lyricpoet |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*thud* Darn DarkDaddy......this is beyond lovely. Beautiful...just beautiful... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's this...here... "but still you are that ocean that I hurry to view on the dawn whose voice of waves I crave when the evenings fold to night not to posses the gem of your tides but just to worship for moments as you stir the grains of my shore into a longing for longer storms that more of me might be captured" just leaves the heart undone.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...That heart paint of yours is sure awesome....this feels like it should be hung in a museum. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
DS, I have been gone and missed reading your poetry. I have much to catch up on - one thing I do know - you still mesmerize me with the beauty of your words, the thought behind them, and the way you put it all together. I love this poem. It (like all your poetry) is in my library. This one though is printed and saved too. Is that okay? Thank you for sharing so much of your artistic and creative mind. A |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs...oh don't thud..you will bruise that lovely woman of you, thanks babe ___________ ms suesea, thank you for taking a tour of this and for wearing some of it on your mind skin. _________ ms martie, thanks lil neighbor, you sooth my demons with your reply ______________ ms az, anything my pen bleeds is blessed if you touch it, thank you lady for your eyes. _____________ ms vandana, thank you lady for your gift of reply. |
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