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S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2007-11-08 06:42 PM

              Re-emergence

              Fallen
              leaves release
              even their once hidden colors
              through common soil
              to waiting roots

              An old and patient oak
              stands in biding hunger
              as latent buds anticipate
              in the cold and
              winter light

              Fresh surfaces
              will surely unfold
              to a new season
              of sunfilled stanzas
              and moonlit phrases

                  submitted as a complement to 1slick_lady's Unfold

                  S.A.G.

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (11-08-2007 08:20 PM).]

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-11-08 06:59 PM

Excellent 'write!':

I am particularly fond of:

             "Fresh surfaces
              will surely unfold
              to a new season
              of sunfilled stanzas
              and moonlit phrases"

serious applause!!

and, I love the "woven by a poet's loom!"

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-11-08 08:07 PM

Arthur! I am pleased to witness your own "re-emergence"! Welcome back!

The following stanza was especially meaningful to me.

"An old and patient oak
              stands in biding hunger
              as latent buds anticipate
              in the cold and
              winter light"

Loving hug,

EA

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart