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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-11-07 08:56 PM



Unfold


underneath a might oak
there are countless letters
now leaves against the wind
once pages and pages
I didn’t send
a diary of one heart
ink of a soul
whispers to a shadow
where secrets there
unfold

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love"  Anne Rice



© Copyright 2007 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-11-08 05:07 AM


how absolutely beautiful!

pages ... leaves ... wondrous thoughts unfold from your pen.

Love,
Margherita

Brian23
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2 posted 2007-11-08 05:15 AM


Wow such nice imagery in this poem, a pleasure to read.
Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2007-11-08 09:07 AM


...collecting leaves
LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-11-08 10:31 AM


Lady, hello, it's so good to read you again...and as always, you leave me feeling at a loss for words...as yours are artfully articulated...

Hugs
Me

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2007-11-08 12:22 PM


Beautiful imagery, Lady
                    Ida

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-11-08 02:25 PM




"a diary of one heart"

Helen you never cease to amaze me
hugs to you


secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2007-11-08 07:01 PM


This 'write' is quite fine!

I am especially fond of the lines:

"a diary of one heart
ink of a soul
whispers to a shadow"

serious, sustained applause!!

iliana
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8 posted 2007-11-09 12:53 PM


Helen, I really like the feel of this one...leaves me wanting more.  *hugs*....jo
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-11-09 12:58 PM


Helen.. I do so like this! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2007-11-09 11:54 AM


Fantabulous!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2007-11-09 03:36 PM


really much enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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