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Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california

0 posted 2007-11-07 05:58 AM


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=327980&songID=5949413

Cut and paste this address to listen to the poem read aloud. Just click on the green button that says Hi-Fi to play it.

BANG!!!....oops...

It’s amazing how far I’ve come
and how slow I remain
as I glimpse at the building’s glass door
and attempt to walk through.
I see the word, I know the word, but still
it’s a fifty fifty chance I’ll mess it up.

BANG!!!....oops…

Twenty-five years on this planet and yet
I cannot master the Push or Pull concept.
I blame phonetics, alliteration, anything,
but my defective brain.

They should say Push or Tug, Push or Yank,
that would help prevent confusion.

Like when I would play outside in the Oregon cold
with my younger cousin Joy.
A motherly voice would call for one of us.
Joey, where are you? ---or,
Joy, where are you?
Us knowing the answer to both questions,
but unsure who should speak, what to do.  

It tricks my brain, not me,
I am convinced we are not the same thing.
I do not stutter, my brain does,
I know what is right long before it.
But I must be polite and wait for it to catch up.


By: Joe Houck

"A witty saying prooves nothing" (Voltare)

© Copyright 2007 Joe B. Houck - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-11-07 06:08 AM


Good morning, Joe! This was a treat to read ~ and to listen to! You have a wonderful voice and your recite very well!

"I do not stutter, my brain does,
I know what is right long before it.
But I must be polite and wait for it to catch up."

~ You, too?!? lol

I hope that you will be posting more of your fine poetry accompanied by your warm, rich voice!

Hugs 'n smiles,
Linda

Joe Houck
Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
2 posted 2007-11-07 06:16 AM


Good morning Linda! Or rather goodnight, being that I have yet to sleep. Lol. Very glad you liked it. I will definitely post my poems with audio more often.
I hope you do the same. =)
Ok, off to bed for me.

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
3 posted 2007-11-07 11:54 PM


What an magical way to 'meet' a poet! Listening to the tenor of your voice reading your own thoughts caught me smiling ...my brain catching up with my enchantment after the last word.  LOL

You're right, you do not stutter! Wonderful delivery, Joe.  It's been a long time since I've had the pleasure of going to a poetry reading, and it was a delight that this one came to me! ~ KL


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