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openmind Junior Member
since 2007-11-05
Posts 12 |
I lie myself down as the rain hits the window I lie my head down as the pain hits my pillow Lonely again as I drown myself In tears Only pretend that I can cloud away my fears And sometimes I wish I had an ear to confide in And sometimes it's as if my fears make me go into hiding How can I cope with the troubles of today And how do I approach when I have noting to say The clock ticks to fast it seems I'm forever chasing The plot thicks can I last, my dreams are slowly fading.. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
i think this is very powerful! and sad, much enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Very sad. I remember days when I felt this way. Hope things turn around soon. ~Alyssa Hupomeno. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a portrait of heartfelt words, expressed with deeply moving results...and a word to the wise, if you don't mind...relish and take the good from the bad...it is our purpose, our learning curve. Hugs for a beatifully writen poem. Lee J. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Especially deep. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dreams Rearranged...always possible and at times necessary...James |
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