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openmind
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since 2007-11-05
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0 posted 2007-11-05 04:04 PM



I lie myself down as the rain hits the window
I lie my head down as the pain hits my pillow
Lonely again as I drown myself In tears
Only pretend that I can cloud away my fears
And sometimes I wish I had an ear to confide in
And sometimes it's as if my fears make me go into hiding
How can I cope with the troubles of today
And how do I approach when I have noting to say
The clock ticks to fast it seems I'm forever chasing
The plot thicks can I last, my dreams are slowly fading..

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-05 04:06 PM


i think this is very powerful!
and sad, much enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2007-11-08 09:00 AM


Very sad. I remember days when I felt this way. Hope things turn around soon.

~Alyssa

Hupomeno.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-11-08 10:32 AM


a portrait of heartfelt words, expressed with deeply moving results...and a word to the wise, if you don't mind...relish and take the good from the bad...it is our purpose, our learning curve.  Hugs for a beatifully writen poem.

Lee J.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2007-11-08 01:23 PM


Especially deep.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2007-11-08 02:32 PM


Dreams Rearranged...always possible and at times necessary...James
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