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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Breath your face is a language and it’s speech fits my skin a conversation of touch where night melts into morning unspoken hilltop and valley words some sigh below a whisper butterflylash breeze cools discussing with eyes it is all about the rewards of breath "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"your face is a language and it’s speech fits my skin" Helen you caught me with the first two lines and continued to reel me in outstanding! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"your face is a language" "a conversation of touch" "discussing with eyes" ~ Now that's what I would call close ~ and highly romantic!!! ~ communication! Loved this! May your intimate discourse continue forever more!  Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it, love it, love it~~  M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, take my breath away! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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PrestonThePoet Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 87 |
It started off wonderfully, and finished out making me understand what you feel, Wonderful work, keep it up. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Those rewards make it all worthwhile don't they |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
I like the lineage in this. And no punctuation makes you read it fast without pause. One complete thought in one breath Joe |
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