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Every Day, Mysterious
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Every Day, Mysterious |
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peterpoetry New Member
since 2007-11-04
Posts 1 |
Every Day, Mysterious Every day I brush shoulders with another universe A potential wife, a new best friend, Someone who’d make my life miserable. I scan the faces on the bus Without a clue as to what it is I’m looking for But regardless I always find it, I’m just not sure what it is Or what I am to do with all these feelings With the loneliness that travels through my blood To every part of my body Or the joy that comes from seeing a girl I’ve never met in my life And know I’ll never speak to. Every day I wake up the same way I fall asleep In a swoon, intoxicated, in love, I can’t help it, I’ve fallen in love with the universe And all I’d like as I drift amongst creation Is someone to hold on to, someone not afraid of the mysterious. If you like this, check out my blog at: www.peterspoetrycorner.blogspot.com |
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lightkeeper Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 100pluto |
Wow ! I enjoyed reading your poem Thank you and welcome to pip  Lightkeeper |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
this is good. Enjoyed welcome to PIPtalk.com your blog....good too. I'll read more later Tomtoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, there, Peter! Welcome to our circle of kindred spirits! I loved the following line! ~ "I’ve fallen in love with the universe" ...and as you "drift amongst creation" may you find "someone to hold on to, someone not afraid of the mysterious."  I checked out your Poetry Corner ~ and those were great poems!!! I also noted that you are An American In Paris! ~ Ooops, that's the name of a movie! lol You're an American (student) in Dublin! Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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