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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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you wander slowly through my mind waking what was napping and if a gossamer thread could hold a dream this one would be the first spin if the shell fragments flung when the world egg cracked could find themselves in fragile ivory and form a star it would be the second if the quicksilver of your smile could fall on the wayside and I could find it for my pocket it would be the third if I could stand in the shade of your breath and feel the warm in and out touch my hands it would be the fourth and if a reed whistling green notes could call you to my side and I could keep you it would be the last oh it would be the last |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Simply beautiful from first to last! Much enjoyed! |
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Shadow_Singer Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 51 |
Tie a string round my smile And hold it in place for a while Keep it there for me to share |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I was with a few that I hoped would be my last, and they didn't share the feelings. So hopefully this one that you appreciate will be your last... Although the one that I have been with for quite a few years now, will certainly be my last, if it were my choice only...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
always a beauty to enjoy. Tomtoo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and if a reed whistling green notes could call you to my side and I could keep you it would be the last oh it would be the last oh Lady Kate... you smile me with your words... ooh, I think I have just used a Mr Daark's phrase here! But I did enjoy everyone one of yours.. RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone...yeah, what she said...lol you do weave a lovely heather of sooth,,enjoyed it |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
an interesting and fine ‘write!’ I am particularly fond of: “if a gossamer thread could hold a dream this … would be the first spin” Applause!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful thoughts from first to last~~ M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...whistle, and he shall come! ~ and he will stay! ~ So mote it be!  May love always find its way to you, Dear Lady. To love and being loved, LA  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
each and every time i read you the hair stands on the back of my neck wonderful just wonderful |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful!! I love this! *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lady kate.....oh...I am SO smiling here....my sister....you KNOW this touches me deeply and well....yep....it DO make me smile.....you are so lovely here in this.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Honeybunch thank you so very much Shadow, I love your lines thank you thank you James Tomtoo, thank you Roniece. my friend you make me smile thank you stranger darlin’ thank you I enjoy all you do poet, thank you serious bowing M, thank you for your reply thank you for your wishes Linda Angel Helen, thank you for your reply and much more southern thank you very much gentle Donna, my sister thank you for your words |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mmmmmmmmm, the very LAST  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Kate, I think your heart sings beautifully here and this delightful, captivating song is even more powerful than the "reed whistling green notes"... to call him to your side. Enjoyed this very much. Love, Margherita |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Ah, those dreams! Love the "calling reed". |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Oh, I read, re-read, and spun upon your gossamer threads. Loved the dance in this one!!! ~ KL |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"and if a reed whistling green notes could call you to my side and I could keep you it would be the last" All inclusive 'Alpha and Omega', Milady... breathe a sigh and whisper the small 'word' to 'make it so'. MoonShadow |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Oh my, it's been quit some time since I've spent time in here, and I've sorely missed many as yourself. this was absolute charm and wisdom...thank you Lee J. |
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