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Fall impression |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Fall Impression Shuffling through crisp-frosted rainbow leaves Lofting plumes of wood smoke and dreams chimes echoing in the breeze and dapple-sun deep-chilled air… ‘piping for the blood to dance’ Fine Summer memories and Winter fears… bookends for Autumn reveries! [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (11-03-2007 07:21 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Honestly, Bruce, I could read your poetry all day long. It makes me feeeel good! You capture the essence of autumn and I appreciate how well you can relay to your readers. Giving you a warm, autumnal hug, Linda  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I savor strolls through Autumn's resplendent palette, and this poem guides my mind along such a path, through dappled sunlight. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Ohhhhh!! This makes me homesick again! Beautifully written, I can almost smell those leaves... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I definitely get a wonderful impression of fall. Ida |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bruce, This is as succinct as I would like to see on a crisp fall day; something that would echo in my ears as I skiff along the leaves that lay golden and bronze before me. And then I hear the ice tones of what is to come, as the breeze crisps my cheeks, the winds slow my bones.... This...is the dance of fall... Thank you! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Bruce Your poetry continues to delight me with the beauty that you paint. Thank you for this on a dark winter night - I love fall. It is so fleeting here. Alison |
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