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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-11-03 03:45 PM


Whisper your words softly

sharing our secrets under quilts
Brilliant colors splashing
over bodies sprawling
across each other
A jigsaw puzzle of legs and arms

Nose to nose conversations
Fingers tracing
accentuating thought
punctuating with each stroke
While snow drifts silently
on window sills strewn
with last summer’s sunflower seeds

Together sharing dreams, desires
while sipping a lazy Saturday morning
mixed with warm coffee and milk

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Alison

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2007-11-03 07:33 PM


and oh I envy you...

thank you lady a, for the glimpse of what could be.


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-11-03 07:39 PM


Now that is my kind of a lazy Saturday morning!
Alison, you certainly know how to convey those kinds of special moments between a man and a woman. I enjoy reading them, very much! ~ as well as experience those scenarios with a significant other!

to love and more love!

Linda

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-11-03 10:01 PM



I want your Saturday morning Alison
it's so warm and huggly


Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
4 posted 2007-11-04 01:45 AM


You have expressed intimacy so beautifully here and I find myself sighing.  I also want a sipping day and it doesn't only have to be on a Saturday!  
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2007-11-04 04:34 AM


Silky...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2007-11-04 06:33 AM


ooooh very nice my sweet friend Ali... very nice!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
7 posted 2007-11-04 07:34 AM


ms az, a mouth watering snapshot of lovely, enjoyed it ms
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
8 posted 2007-11-04 11:01 AM


a most grand-fine impression...excellent 'write!'

v. serious, long-sustained applause!!

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