Open Poetry #41 |
dragon fly super glue |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
maybe it is the curiosity when you turn over stones in your evening gown stopping traffic in an instant and asking me questions about what is on the other side of the road I would lead you down or would we even cross completely maybe just stay in the middle and go both ways together chasing the parked cars we missed riding in when we were younger or parking in cars we hurried in and wanted to spend more time knowing from the inside out without the protection of our lover's gloves on _______________ daak |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...the title reminded me of anothre..."Sunshine Superman"...a song sung by Donovan many years ago...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I won't pretend to understand your work. However I do enjoy the read |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
you attract, fly-paper strong she flits, lands lightly, lingers...curious your super glue love |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and asking me questions about what is on the other side of the road I would lead you down or would we even cross completely maybe just stay in the middle and go both ways together chasing the parked cars we missed riding in when we were younger" as long as the road leads to beaches..... [This message has been edited by SEA (11-02-2007 10:58 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend james, thank you sir _________ interloper, thank you for just looking in __________ ms kahlil, bless you for your eyes, they always make me look northward ___________ ms suesea...there is an ocean waiting lady friend, always an ocean waiting |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
or parking in cars we hurried in and wanted to spend more time knowing from the inside out without the protection of our lover's gloves on yes... that would be nice Mr Daark! enjoyed! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B thank you lady!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... if only we could walk this path of discovery in time it would give such pleasure and also comfort! I do enjoy so much your poetic performances, dear D. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you for looking in the windows here |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"chasing the parked cars we missed riding in when we were younger" smack in the middle of the road that's the best place stranger darlin' lead on |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone...corner of there and here..with the lights on and hungry..yes ms, and thank you for stopping by |
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