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Open Poetry #41

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Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

0 posted 2007-11-02 02:10 PM

You wake me with coffee and a smile,
So I leave my dreaming for a while,
To sit and listen to your plans,
Then I get dressed and get the car,
Riding to the airport that’s not too far,
So that you can travel to other lands.
There’s nothing said that will hold you
So our words are far too few
A hug and a quick goodbye
And I return home with a sigh
To fall into dreams not so new.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-11-02 06:15 PM

You know,
Something should be said to hold me...I think I would be spellbound!

Nice write.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2007-11-02 06:29 PM

An unsettling undertone here. Sounds like you need to talk....

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2007-11-02 08:47 PM

Shadow_Singer,

Much enjoyed. I've read your poetry once before. I like it.

miscellanea

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2007-11-03 03:44 AM

maybe its time for some new dreams~

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

5 posted 2007-11-04 04:04 AM

Thanks to all, new words and songs will come, and even a new dream or two.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-11-05 01:04 PM

I enjoyed this Shadow
wishing you new dreams
new smiles

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