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EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2007-07-23 08:55 PM

Goodbye, pretty lady
With flowers in your hair
I'm sure you pay me little mind
For I was never there

Farewell, pretty lady
May these days be your best
Though I wish I knew you more
It's alright nonetheless

So long, pretty lady
When I think of you, I'm glad
To me, you are the sister
That I've never, ever had

Good luck, pretty lady
You know your path shines true
But if you would ever call on me
I'm always there for you

Se La Vie, my darling!
You have all my respect
Just know that someone loves you
Whom you did not expect

There are many great people in the world, but real people are one in a million.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2007-07-24 12:49 PM

Joseph! This is an excellent write. Seems sad to let go but sometimes... Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-07-24 01:19 AM

I had a man say about the same thing to me recently, excluding the "sister" part

but you write it so much more beautifully

SouthernJustice
Member

since 2007-12-15

Posts 159

3 posted 2008-01-09 04:48 AM

sad, brother, but well written, SJ

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2008-01-09 05:34 AM

A wonderful write.

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

5 posted 2008-01-09 10:20 AM

Beautifully done.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-01-09 12:46 PM

Well done, Joseph.
Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-01-09 03:13 PM

Enjoyed...James

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2008-01-10 09:43 PM

Makes my heart sigh...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2008-01-11 11:02 AM

To wish her well is a generous gift, I love your attitude.
C'est la vie, bien sûr!

Beautiful write.

love,
Margherita

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

10 posted 2008-01-11 01:33 PM

love the read. sigh!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2008-01-11 01:55 PM

Isn't it funny how we go through life,
thinking that we're invisible..

this is lovely...and I almost heard it
as a song.

Good job, Joseph!

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

12 posted 2008-01-13 06:44 PM

This really shows your heart, Joseph. Thank you for sharing.

Alison

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2008-01-13 10:06 PM

It's great to finally see your handsome, smiling face!

Your poem was both sad and sweet ~ and very touching.

EA

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

14 posted 2008-01-16 05:20 AM

lovely! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

15 posted 2008-01-16 08:21 AM

Oh so sweet...and nice photo!

She is lucky and blessed to have your words..whoever she may be...

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

16 posted 2008-01-16 08:27 AM

Very nice & generous...

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