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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-11-01 02:21 AM

Love is where the wind blows
but it’s lonely just like me
for the blue intractable
and the clouds unfixed.

Down it comes to solid ground
a searcher just like me
and finds the hair, the skin,
of absolute perfection.

And peace comes then upon it
but peace is not forever
when the perfect can’t believe
love is in the air.

Then unabsorbed love moans
and it’s like thunder in the sky
that echoes down the years
of solitary confinement.

If you wake up wondering
why love’s out there not here
it’s because, because, simply because,
you didn’t let it in!

Helen / 1 November 2007
www.dreamtimepoetry.com

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-11-01 02:33 AM

A wonderful poem to end my day with
Lonely but lovely

Nah, not lonely - it's ... touching inside me
and whispers ... just read, feel and understand. Does that make sense?

I really enjoy your writing.

Alison

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-11-01 02:50 AM

Thank you so much, Alison. (My daughter's name is Alison). I don't seem to have any other "words of wisdom" to offer at this time so just another "thank you".

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-11-01 04:28 AM

Then unabsorbed love moans
and it’s like thunder in the sky
that echoes down the years
of solitary confinement.

If you wake up wondering
why love’s out there not here
it’s because, because, simply because,
you didn’t let it in!

ohh, dear Helen, this is stunningly beautiful, even though it hurts. But now that the secret is unveiled, it's still the right time to open the doors...

I deeply enjoy your words always, this is precious. You always share wisdom, besides perfect beauty.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-11-01 06:56 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NNC0kIzM1Fo

I'll be humming that song all day!

Great write Helen.

"If you wake up wondering
why love’s out there not here
it’s because, because, simply because,
you didn’t let it in! "

So true.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-11-01 08:01 AM

Nice...James

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2007-11-01 08:14 AM

Thank you Margherita, JL, and James. It seems to be raining "inside" today but then again it often does despite my best efforts.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2007-11-01 10:23 AM

Love it, Helen! I'm letting it in!

....jo

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2007-11-01 10:25 AM

Amen!
Well done!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

9 posted 2007-11-01 10:41 AM

Jo! How good to see you. Letting it in is sometimes not as easy as one would think because we THINK too much! Thanks for the read.

Interloper - Thank you! I appreciate you stopping by.

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

10 posted 2007-11-01 11:11 AM

Wonderful piece and so very true, love has to be let in. Something that I am finally learning. lisa

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

11 posted 2007-11-01 11:45 AM

Lisa - so glad you are finally learning. It is an ongoing process and it's never too late to start. Thank you for the read.

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