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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-10-28 11:11 AM


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Autumn—dawn—

All the lawns
Are full of squirrels


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1 posted 2007-10-28 11:14 AM


well, i love the ending of fall
and the start

enjoyed Write

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rosey_red
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since 2007-10-31
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2 posted 2007-10-31 06:13 PM


A poem that is short,  but brings out the fall season
r&r

TomMark
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3 posted 2007-11-01 04:42 AM



Fall-leaves-

All the eaves
Are (       ) colors.

Fetching?


lyricpoet
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4 posted 2007-11-01 06:50 AM


Well done

Author Kevin Brian Wright 2007

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2007-11-01 10:33 AM


Grab the shotgun, quick
TomMark
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6 posted 2007-11-01 10:44 AM


why gun?!  He is charmingly crossing each of their eyes, young or old.
ladylisa
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7 posted 2007-11-01 11:06 AM


So true tis a beautiful time of the year and the sounds are soothing.  Well done. lisa
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