Open Poetry #41 |
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Gaza |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569![]() |
![]() The soldiers came to Gaza To carry out their brothers Against the law, they said Homes will be bulldozed The soldiers came to Gaza Try to remain peaceful and kind Hand them water, carry the Torah Crying in the synagogue The soldiers came to Gaza Fathers wail to a God they Think has abandoned them And hold their children The soldiers came to Gaza Mothers pointing fingers Shouting curses, Shame on you Hat brims pulled low to hide tears The soldiers came to Gaza Seeing their youth, And their kinship Some will hug the soldiers instead Belongings in a bag The soldiers came to Gaza The sadness is palpable The tears are ever flowing Bodies may leave, but the souls remain |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Tina you have touched this delicate theme with great sensitivity. Love and Peace! Margherita ![]() |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thank you Margherita. Peace to you and yours also. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Bodies may leave, but the souls remain" yes, they remain forever Tina shalom |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tears cannot wash away the pain of those who have suffered the loss of a loved one, to war. An emotional read, and undoubtedly, a very emotional one to write. Love, Harmony and World Peace, EA ![]() |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thank you both. ![]() Shalom |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very touching Tina. There is nothing more tramatic than loosing one's home and way of life. How difficult it must have been for those soldiers to carry out such an order. Ida |
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