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Open Poetry #41

Ice King

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2007-10-30 10:31 PM

Hearts of Ice

I traced your heart with delicate fingers
Feeling through skin which seemed of steel
Trying to feel the heartbeat of your soul
Or just a tingle of a bit of good
Because sometimes you seemed indifferent.

For once I wanted to walk away with a smile
Knowing that my kisses and passion
Had dreamed your pain away;
Instead I awoke each cold night
Mumbling the words, “Ice Queen”
As a subtle smile creased your sleeping lips…

Lately, I find myself in better spirits
When at last you bid your heart to truth,
Vowing eternal love and happily ever after;
But now, I have found appreciation in another,
Slowly removing her silk blouse in my dreams,
With a smile frozen like my heartbeat.
I have come to enjoy the indifference to good,
And the mumbling across you sleeping lips,
Of, “Ice King”.

Marcel

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-10-31 05:44 AM

Nice...James

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-10-31 07:46 AM

Such 'indifference' has brought an end to many a relationship.
A well written, poignant heartbeat piece, Keith.

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