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Open Poetry #41
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2007-10-30 02:33 PM

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Leaves float by
Under the shadow
Of a narrow bridge

Some fall to lie
On the shores
Of a shallow stream

One comes down
To rest for a moment
On my head

And I am king
Without pandering
Autumn for a crown


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illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22
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1 posted 2007-10-30 08:58 PM

Oh what peace is denoted within the words of your work! Excellent closing line!

Illusive c
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-10-30 09:10 PM

once again, to me...this is excellent
Zen poetry...all the more particularly
pleasant due to the inclusion of my
favorite season...

yes, it is indeed a grand closing line!

serious, sustained applause!!
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