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Arkarian
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0 posted 2007-10-30 11:11 AM



These words of mine
Can give One joy,
Or break One heart.
These words of mine
Are used with care,
With precious care.
These words of mine
Must always love,
With selfless love.
These words of mine
Will wait their time,
Will wait their time.


© Copyright 2007 Arkarian - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-10-30 11:23 AM


Arkarian~
WELCOME to Passions In Poetry~

We are all about words here ...
will look forward to reading more of yours~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-10-30 01:50 PM


Hi, Arkarian! Welcome to piptalk! I hope you enjoy these blue pages as much as I have ~ and continue to do!

Two of my favourite words are "joy" and "love" ~ and your poetic use of them, had me smiling.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

Margherita
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3 posted 2007-10-30 05:13 PM


Welcome to Pip!
You have very good Word intentions, I see.

Love,
Margherita

marcel
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az, usa
4 posted 2007-10-30 10:05 PM


I like it...it feels of caution...........
Sunshine
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5 posted 2007-10-31 08:58 AM


Arkarian,

a most delightful rendering. Welcome to
Passions! Please, check your email for
a very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2007-10-31 09:38 AM


Welcome, you will like it here

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

aziza
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7 posted 2007-10-31 10:35 AM


Welcome to PiP.
This is a place that gives me
a lot of pleasure.
I hope it does the same for you.

Alison

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8 posted 2007-10-31 05:29 PM


Nice...James
rugged_miss
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9 posted 2007-10-31 05:45 PM


The phrases that really caught my attention were the ones in which u said those words of yours "Can give One joy Or break One heart." I just remembered the saying "one man's meat is another man's poison". That which brings us joy could be causing another's sorrow...
Welcome Arkarian, your stuff is beautiful....

rosey_red
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10 posted 2007-10-31 06:18 PM


A poem with thoughts and feelings

r&r

lyricpoet
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11 posted 2007-10-31 08:21 PM


Much enjoyed!
Xillus_Xavier
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12 posted 2007-10-31 08:50 PM


Enjoyed this
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