Open Poetry #41 |
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Jack O'Lantern |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
![]() JACK O'LANTERN by Linda L. Dowd I carved a pumpkin and named it Jack, then painted him, a moustache black. Upon his head, I placed a crown, and carved a smile ~ up-side down. His eyes were sad and lacking light, so in to him, I put candle bright. He came alive and boomed to me, “I’m Jack O’Lantern! You set me free!” His face transformed to grinning beast. He said, on me ~ he’d like to feast! I was terrified from head to toe, as the jack-o-lantern began to grow. I screamed and tried to run away, but my two feet were clumps of clay. Flames leaped out and singed my clothes. The horrid smell burnt my nose. Its flaming mouth was gaping wide. I feared that I would soon be fried. I shuddered when it growled at me, then ran and hid behind oak tree. With clap of thunder, came the rain. and Jack O’Lantern writhed in pain. All remains of the fiery beast, were left for bats, on which to feast. I carved a pumpkin and named it Jack, then painted him, a moustache black. Upon his head, I placed a crown, and carved a smile ~ up-side down. . [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-28-2007 10:39 PM).] |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write Linda, One thing for sure there's nothing wrong with your imagination, great rhyming. Take care. warm hugs to you dear girl. Lindsay |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
With Halloween almost here this is a great way to get into the pumpkin carving spirit. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Linda, I am impressed. You did a fantastic job here. I nearly felt like running away too ... Happy Halloween! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Good job. Scary picture and scary poem.. WOoooo"late" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lindsay ~ This was fun to write! I got into the Halloween 'spirit' as I wrote it! lol Thank you for your kind response. Loves 'n Booze! ~ Ooops! I mean "BOOs!!! lol Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
X_X ~ Thank you! ~ and I adored the clever and comical clerihews that you posted. ![]() Happy Halloweenie hug, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita ~ 'Tis the season to be wary, of monsters bad ~ and very scary! They'll eat you if you turn your back, 'Cause you would make a tasty snack! Happy Halloweenie hugs of love, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Late ~ Then it's mission accomplished! BOO to you! ~ and a great big halloweenie hug! Linda ![]() |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"With clap of thunder, came the rain. and Jack O’Lantern writhed in pain. All remains of the fiery beast, were left for bats, on which to feast." Always a good side to every story! I say good riddance to Jack O’Lantern, and hello bat food… Nice write Linda!! JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Linda... this was so much fun to read!! Happy Halloween my friend! ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric!!! Hi, there! It's been awhile! Thanks for stopping by ~ and for leaving such an "excellent" reply! ![]() Giving you a warm hug 'n a half, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JL ~ Right on, Tex Man! lol ~ May you never be a meal for the batty ones! Happy Halloweenie hugs, EA ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
RDB ~ A happy Halloweenie hello to you, Roniece! Will you be dishing out candies ~ or be out there trick-or-treating?!? lol I am so pleased that you enjoyed my tall tale! ![]() Linda |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthyOne~ For an ANGEL ... you sure are full of ![]() A delightful read ... the grandie girlies will enjoy it too~ We painted 'punkins' last week~ ![]() Trick or treat ? It's ALWAYS A TREAT to read you~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I doubt there is a child in the country who would not totally enjoy this poem... Perhaps this is my second childhood. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge ~ I am delighted that you will be showing this post to Delaney and Landry! Give them each a big, happy halloweenie hug and a Hershey's chocolate kiss from their "Queen Angel". ![]() ![]() ![]() EA/EO/QA/ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magnus ~ Well, m'dear fellow poet, I am enjoying my second childhood as well! ~ Actually, I don't think the first one ever ended! ![]() Thank you for the very nice comment! Happy Halloweenie Huggarroooos! Linda Lou |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Linda! This is fantastic! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Smartest Chick ~ Hi, Sweet Sue! Trick or treat! Nah, I'd never trick you! You're sweet and deserve a treat! ![]() Happy Halloweenie hugs, Linda ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes, it is very close...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea, don't angels have magic powers to beat evil? lol Next time paint an angle face on your pumpkin and call her Jill O'Lantern. lol Good halloween poem. ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Arctic Wind ~ What a cute reply! ~ and a great suggestion you have there! Thank you! ![]() Happy Halloweenie Huggarrooonies! EA ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James ~ Oooops! I almost missed your reply! Thanks for reading and responding! HH hugs Linda |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very Cute! Happy Halloween, Linda! I really like the combination of artwork and your poem. Poor little Pumpkin! I'm sure he didn't mean to scare anyone... Darn bats--I was hoping for a piece of that pumpkin pie... Thanks for nice little treat! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh my, Linda....our Angel can always be relied upon for a seasonable treat! I'd like to carve up that ole Jack and make some pumpkin pie.....yum! Enjoyed muchly.......KBHBLY.....lily jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Misce ~ Oh, you should have seen him! He grew to 10 feet high! He surely would have made, ~ One gigantic pumpkin pie! ![]() Great to hear from you! Have a H H ! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana ~ So there you are! ~ You busy little lily jo! I am baking a pumpkin pie today ~ but not from ole Jack's remains! Would you like me to send you a piece via air angel express! ![]() I'll send a piece to misce, as well! KBHBLY 2 Linda ![]() |
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rosey_red Junior Member
since 2007-10-31
Posts 14 |
His face transformed to grinning beast. He said, on me ~ he’d like to feast! I was terrified from head to toe, as the jack-o-lantern began to grow. Halloween spirit is your true poetic self r&r |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
rosey_red ~ "Halloween spirit is your true poetic self" ~ Well, not really! lol I just play around a bit with the dark stuff! ~ 'Tis the season! tehehe ![]() EA |
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