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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2007-10-29 03:04 PM





The
Spells of Black Magic

Centuries ago, when the moon was full
Three witches made a book from an evil soul
Mixing up potions and dark magic too,
Spells to defeat and some to “BOO!”

The villagers found out and ran to their tomb.
While witches screamed out threats of doom.
No one saw the witches anymore,
Until I came upon the wide, open door.

Creeping through my attic fast,
I came upon the spell book to cast.
Flipping through pages, looking at spells,
Some to defeat and open hell wells.

The spell book closed, and the wind stopped.
I screamed with might, and the spell book dropped.
It shined and it glowed, I had to think fast.
The witches laughed, I knew I wouldn’t last.

I opened my book. It wasn’t too late,
Looking through pages determined my fate.
The witches transformed, their eyes turned red.
I was afraid that I would be dead.

The attic was pitch black, no one was there.
Howling and growling, it sounded like a bear
The spell book glowed and I finally knew,
A vanishing spell was what I was to do.

“Dark and light”, I use this spell.
“Vanish those who are evil that dwell.”
The lights flickered and the doors banged.
The witches screamed as they lit up in flame

It was done, but something wasn’t right.
My eyes turned black, I couldn’t fight.
Vulnerable, my veins rushed, and inside I was killed.
I was no longer me; the evil spirit had me filled.

For centuries, and centuries, I’ll be possessed.
Dark and evil -- a soul unblessed.
Until another soul, comes and uses a spell,
I will be hunting for souls wherever they dwell.

ARCTIC WIND

BOO!
HAPPY HALLOWEEN

© Copyright 2007 Arctic Wind - All Rights Reserved
Bronzeage
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1 posted 2007-10-29 03:26 PM


Cute Write, AC. Very nice.
Magnus
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2 posted 2007-10-29 03:40 PM


Yes, a very cute write...You are working
hard to put things in their proper place
but you need to concentrate a little on
your meter.....the poem flows very well
in most spots but there are a few that
need a little refining. In some places,
a shorter but similar word might take
the place of a longer one that throws
things out of whack.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-10-30 04:31 PM


Well AW, I certainly hope that a good witch comes along who has pity on your soul ~ and on the souls of your future victims! ~ and then casts a white magic spell on you, turning you back into our refreshing wind from the arctic circle!  lol  

This was a bewitching write!  Happy hunting! ~ for candy that is! ~ not victims! tehehe

Treats, not tricks,

Earth Angel



Margherita
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4 posted 2007-10-30 04:37 PM


Gosh, this is truly quite frightening! BOO!

Compliments on your talent!

Happy Halloween!
Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-10-30 04:43 PM


Bronze-

thank you

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-10-30 04:44 PM


magnus-

i shall ake that, and use it in my next poem, i am open for corrections,

thank you

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2007-10-30 04:45 PM


ea-

wow, thank you, i am sure i will become better soon lol

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-10-30 04:46 PM


margherita-

thank you,

you are so sweet

ARCTIC WIND

Shadow_Singer
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9 posted 2007-10-30 05:35 PM


good poem for the season

Interloper
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10 posted 2007-10-30 05:47 PM


Happy all hollows eve eve
Artic Wind
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11 posted 2007-10-30 06:26 PM


shawdow Singer -

thank you

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2007-10-30 06:27 PM


interloper-

thank you so much

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

icebox
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13 posted 2007-10-31 01:07 PM


Interesting write.

Real magic is neither black nor white; simply, it is.  It takes a human to shade it in some way.

Blessed Samhain.


Artic Wind
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14 posted 2007-10-31 04:10 PM


icebox-

thank you so much

HAPP HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2007-10-31 04:15 PM


Hi, Arctic Wind! After reading the spell-binding poem that Serenity Blaze has written for you, I thought I'd come back to visit this poem which was the 'source' of her inspiration.

Her love has set you free! (and for good measure, I am sending some your way as well!)

Love & Angel Light,

EA

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2007-10-31 04:20 PM


ea

thank you so much, and a big

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

SPOOKY ARCTIC WIND


rosey_red
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17 posted 2007-10-31 06:30 PM


Did you see that a girl poet wrote you a unbinding spell poem, hope you get better lol
r&r

LindsayP
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18 posted 2007-11-01 09:04 PM



Great write Arctic Wind

much enjoyed

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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19 posted 2007-11-02 09:44 PM


roseyRed-

thank you, and welcome to pip!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2007-11-02 09:45 PM


LindsayP-

thank you, i am so happy that you enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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