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Spells Of Black Magic (happy halloween)
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Spells Of Black Magic (happy halloween) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 The Spells of Black Magic Centuries ago, when the moon was full Three witches made a book from an evil soul Mixing up potions and dark magic too, Spells to defeat and some to “BOO!” The villagers found out and ran to their tomb. While witches screamed out threats of doom. No one saw the witches anymore, Until I came upon the wide, open door. Creeping through my attic fast, I came upon the spell book to cast. Flipping through pages, looking at spells, Some to defeat and open hell wells. The spell book closed, and the wind stopped. I screamed with might, and the spell book dropped. It shined and it glowed, I had to think fast. The witches laughed, I knew I wouldn’t last. I opened my book. It wasn’t too late, Looking through pages determined my fate. The witches transformed, their eyes turned red. I was afraid that I would be dead. The attic was pitch black, no one was there. Howling and growling, it sounded like a bear The spell book glowed and I finally knew, A vanishing spell was what I was to do. “Dark and light”, I use this spell. “Vanish those who are evil that dwell.” The lights flickered and the doors banged. The witches screamed as they lit up in flame It was done, but something wasn’t right. My eyes turned black, I couldn’t fight. Vulnerable, my veins rushed, and inside I was killed. I was no longer me; the evil spirit had me filled. For centuries, and centuries, I’ll be possessed. Dark and evil -- a soul unblessed. Until another soul, comes and uses a spell, I will be hunting for souls wherever they dwell. ARCTIC WIND BOO! HAPPY HALLOWEEN |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Cute Write, AC. Very nice. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, a very cute write...You are working hard to put things in their proper place but you need to concentrate a little on your meter.....the poem flows very well in most spots but there are a few that need a little refining. In some places, a shorter but similar word might take the place of a longer one that throws things out of whack. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well AW, I certainly hope that a good witch comes along who has pity on your soul ~ and on the souls of your future victims! ~ and then casts a white magic spell on you, turning you back into our refreshing wind from the arctic circle! lol  This was a bewitching write! Happy hunting! ~ for candy that is! ~ not victims! tehehe Treats, not tricks, Earth Angel  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gosh, this is truly quite frightening! BOO! Compliments on your talent! Happy Halloween! Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Bronze- thank you HAPPY HALLOWEEN |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
magnus- i shall ake that, and use it in my next poem, i am open for corrections, thank you HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea- wow, thank you, i am sure i will become better soon lol HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
margherita- thank you, you are so sweet  ARCTIC WIND |
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Shadow_Singer Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 51 |
good poem for the season |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Happy all hollows eve eve |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
shawdow Singer - thank you HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
interloper- thank you so much HAPPY HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Interesting write. Real magic is neither black nor white; simply, it is. It takes a human to shade it in some way. Blessed Samhain. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
icebox- thank you so much HAPP HALLOWEEN ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Arctic Wind! After reading the spell-binding poem that Serenity Blaze has written for you, I thought I'd come back to visit this poem which was the 'source' of her inspiration. Her love has set you free! (and for good measure, I am sending some your way as well!)Love & Angel Light, EA  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea thank you so much, and a big HAPPY HALLOWEEN SPOOKY ARCTIC WIND |
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rosey_red Junior Member
since 2007-10-31
Posts 14 |
Did you see that a girl poet wrote you a unbinding spell poem, hope you get better lol r&r |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write Arctic Wind much enjoyed Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
roseyRed- thank you, and welcome to pip! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LindsayP- thank you, i am so happy that you enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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