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October Balcony |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The autumn yellow Leaves seem so still In the cold night air Just across the street There are trees whose limbs Are already bare Those that are gone Will never be seen again Those that are left Are very few Above all the noise On the world’s roads I can hear The silence of the moon . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is a wonderful rich write! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Once again...to me, this is Zen minimalism at its best! I am especially most fond of: "Above all the noise On the world’s roads I can hear The silence of the moon(!)" serious, long-sustained applause!! |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Wonderful~~~ love the ending Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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