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Shadow_Singer
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since 2007-10-24
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0 posted 2007-10-24 07:41 PM


Let me listen to your breath flow,
The beating of your heart,
Let emotions make the time slow
As love’s song does start.

Touch my lips to your lips,
Sway your hips on my hips,
Let us share the very air;
Be as close as close can get
Let the feeling make our skin wet
With the energy we can share.

Let me listen to your breath flow,
The beating of your heart,
Let emotions make the time slow
As love’s song does start.

Stir the fire of my desire,
Fan the flames of love higher,
Burn me with each tender caress
Leave me in a quivering heap
Too excited to drift to sleep
Too exhausted not to rest.

Let me listen to your breath flow,
The beating of your heart,
Let emotions make the time slow
As love’s song does start.

Does your chest rise now slow
As deep breaths makes the song grow,
Let my fingers rekindle the flame
As your touching ignites mine
It this love rhythm  we both find
For we sing this song just the same.

Let me listen to your breath flow,
The beating of your heart,
Let emotions make the time slow
As love’s song does start.



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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2007-10-24 09:27 PM


Welcome.
Stunning write.

Shadow_Singer
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2 posted 2007-10-25 07:41 AM


Thank you, stunning so much so it got few responses, your song of praise delights me.
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2007-10-25 08:09 AM


Poetry is a very personal thing...it matters not the quantity, just the quality of the response.  Purely passionate.

This struck a personal chord.  Thanks for writing it.

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2007-10-25 09:38 AM


A very inspiring read.

Welcome!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2007-10-25 09:54 AM


ShadowSinger~
WELCOME to the poetic pages of PiP~

A lovely entry piece ...~

Stick with us poet ... read and respond to the works of others ... we will all come to know you, and you will come to know us~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Margherita
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6 posted 2007-10-25 11:10 AM


Welcome Shadow-Singer!

Your first post shows a very passionate nature and I loved it very much.

Love,
Margherita


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-10-26 07:01 AM


I liked what I read... well done to you poet friend...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2007-10-26 08:32 AM





From one songwriter to another~

enjoyed your lovesong!

~~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Shadow_Singer
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9 posted 2007-10-28 12:15 PM


Thank you all

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