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Nature's Way
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Nature's Way |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Nature’s Way As the last fleeting sunbeams dance beyond the tattered edge of twilight, across the stretching miles of evening... and the vast ebony cloak of heaven, (trimmed in drifting clouds and stars) descends to meet these radiant hills dipped in finest liquid-moonlight... just this side of our quicksilver dreams, Nature speaks in clearest ‘voice’ of the deep forest, chanting eternal truths out of Time to those few hearts, minds, and spirits large enough to listen…and to seek a far different, 'better way!' |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"radiant hills dipped in finest liquid-moonlight... just this side of our quicksilver dreams," Dreamy gorgeous imagery! That's a scene I could immerse myself in forever! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Chanting eternal truths out of time"... Strong lines, beautifully displayed in moonlight's sleeve. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am right there breathing it in! Wonderful scenery! Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bruce... wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
As a poet I know whose reviews I admire would say......serious applause! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This one is one of many that should be carved in wax and cast in bronze, don't you think, Readers? The muse spoke clearly to you when you wrote this one, Poet! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is absolute beautiful, Bruce. I think this is one of my favorites of your many wonderful poems. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, ArtSolstice! I'm all for bronze-casting this poet's words. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
how wonderful!!!! TomToo |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! |
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