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Emotional Suicide
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Emotional Suicide |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Touching your face feeling the warmth of your skin beneath my fingers Imagining more...more Hearing you say my name shivers of whispers down my spine to the deepest part of me Wanting more...more Invading my dreams false memories that tease and torment making me ache-bleed-scream Dreaming more...more What you make me feel fantasy...dream what you are to me emotional suicide Still I dream. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
sad ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its good to hold onto dreams, even if they require redirecting...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very passionate and I enjoyed it, but why you choose this to be emotional suicide I don't know. Though James says (and he is wise!) dreams could need some redirecting, I would say they are healthy and bring beautiful emotions. Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"What you make me feel fantasy...dream what you are to me emotional suicide Still I dream. " Beautiful!! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Emotional suicide because he is not for me...he is a friend who doesn't see beyond that... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
having been repeatedly dealt the hand of "emotional suicide" [as likely most (all?!) 'incurable romantics are]...I can truly relate to this write! fine work... serious applause!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Even when we know better, the yearn is there. *S* Very well done!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paula, you have done a fantastic job of depicting your agony ~ and ecstasy!  Linda |
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