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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2007-10-27 05:05 PM

In certain moments –

Raindrops fall against the

Ground…and echoes

Caught in faded

Softness,

Become a quiet part of me.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-10-27 05:15 PM

i didnt exaclty know what it meant, but
it was beautifully worded

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-10-27 05:15 PM

It feels so good to see you back here, dear Eric, you have been missed!

And here you are with one of your gems, that makes me want to say ...

let me be
the moment
the raindrops
the echoes
the softness

and the quiet part of you ...

Loving you,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-10-27 05:20 PM

Nice writing...James

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2007-10-27 06:27 PM

So excited to read you again Eric.
This write shimmers with sensuality.
WOW!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-10-28 08:13 AM

EricC~
Ah ... so wonderful to see your thoughts grace the pages again~

This is soft and lovely~

More please ???

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-10-28 09:05 AM

It is poetry like this that has made me miss reading you, Eric!

Thank you for sharing that "quiet part" of you.

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug,

Linda

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

7 posted 2007-10-28 05:39 PM

Softly beautiful

A

illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

8 posted 2007-10-28 08:07 PM

So wonderfully serene...I could feel it.

Illusive x

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

9 posted 2007-10-29 02:29 PM

So very good to read you again, Eric! This is a gem!

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

10 posted 2007-11-01 11:15 AM

Great piece and I too have experienced the soft quiet moment of the raindrop fading into me. Loved this..... lisa

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2007-11-01 01:12 PM

... experiencing the quiet moment once more.

You are beautiful.

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