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Open Poetry #41

Walden

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-10-26 03:31 PM

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Somewhere above
Outside my head
In the autumn leaves
A captious squirrel

A blond cat
With hidden claws
Slinks across the low brow
In search of prey

Shadows on pebbles
Rocks and stone
Alone on a narrow bridge

I’ve been free too long
For anything else

Sound of water
In the breeze

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-10-26 03:32 PM

beautiful Huan YI!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-10-26 05:32 PM

Very good!

Love,
Margherita

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

3 posted 2007-10-26 09:36 PM

Very nice images, but what no pond?!? I've been to the area of walden pond and this would fit well in the area. enjoyable

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2007-10-27 12:13 PM

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Thank you all

SS, it’s an allusion
drawing a tangential connection
to an experience.

Thanks again

John

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