Open Poetry #41 |
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Only God Can Judge Me |
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Poohhoney_101 New Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 1 |
ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME IS WHAT I SAY WHEN PEOPLE TURN UP THEIR NOSES AND LOOK MY WAY ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME IS WHAT I BELIEVE BESIDES HES THE ONLY ONE I CAN TRUST AND HES ALWAYS ON MY TEAM ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME IS WHAT IVE BEEN TOLD BECAUSE GOD IS THE ONE WHO DECIDES WHERE EVERYONE GOES |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. or maybe not . . . . |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions A rather angry tone to your post...poetry is versatile. It embraces emotions of all kinds. You did a good job getting the emotion across. TD |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Welcome- i have just joined myself, well this september, and i know you will fit in very nicely ARCTIC WIND |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i've learned that anyone can judge you, but god (if you believe in god) probably has the only opinion that matters. like i said, anyone can judge you, but it's teh opinions you let in that affect you. so kep that filter on and your head held high. very defiant post. i can dig. i usually hate all caps, but i think it was a wonderful part of your expression in this piece. welcome to passions, and i hope you get comfy. The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite. |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
I like very much the power behind your words as you write, ( I also happen to 'believe' too ) so I hear very much where you are coming from...Excellent! Illusive.x |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If you drink and drive and get pulled over by the police a local Judge will be judging you pretty quick...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You wrote the truth, here. Welcome to Pip. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi there! Welcome to these blue pages and our circle of friends. I detect an undercurrent of anger in your powerful words. It appears to me that you have felt unduly judged by others. I do agree that God is our supreme judge ~ and it is what HE thinks that counts the most. Be true to yourself and walk tall. ![]() Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! He CAN maybe, but he DOES NOT. That's what I believe, He loves His offspring and taught us not to judge, so that we would not be judged. Jesus said so. We all have our beliefs of course. But we also have rules to live by ... the best is "Do unto others what you would want them to do unto you". You have done well to write this from your heart. Answers will be given, no doubt. He always lets us know, but we need to learn to listen. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoohHoney~ A warm welcome to these pages blue~ You are welcomed to share your thoughts and that's what you've done here~ I personally enjoyed the positive tone of your thoughts~ Check out our Spiritual Journeys forum, I believe you will find much there to enjoy also~ Enjoy your stay with us ....~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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nevermore93 Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 73 |
great poem. btw: i was just wondering if you who are here could check out my new poem in the teen poetry section, and tell me what you think. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome to our blue pages... a very thought provoking first piece.. I hope to read more of your work... enjoyed RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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rugged_miss Junior Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 26 |
So many of us have found it a duty to judge others according to our standards as we believe we are spotless but we are not, far from that and I hope your poem brings us that awareness |
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