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Break My Heart Again
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Break My Heart Again |
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comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
Break My Heart Again It seems that once again you’re in my mind And in my soul I find it so hard to find A voice, a shred of truth in what you’re telling Tonight it’s hard for me to hide my feelings. Once again you broke my heart with desperate truths And hung my feelings out to dry and nothing soothes The sores you leave when you utter but a word I guess it never hurt this much before. You come to me and kiss my hopes of being yours You fuel the fire in my heart and seed the thoughts That one day you will remain to share my bed The way you’ve done so many times, just you and him. Just tell me why, and what makes him so damn special He left you lonely on a whim; you take him back without a question? What has he done that I can’t do out of devotion It’s just not right that you don’t give yourself more options. I want to know your deepest thoughts and share your dreams If only you would give yourself the chance to be with me I want to be the one you wake up to the next tomorrow I want your lips to touch my lips to end the sorrow. Tonight I held you in my arms and my heart shatters Because I know that in your eyes none of it matters You’re heading home and I remain alone in pain Waiting for the moment when you’ll break my heart again. In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We can't force anyone to love us and sometimes we might be happy with a true friendship. Your write renders the longing and the ache very well. Love, Margherita |
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rugged_miss Junior Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 26 |
It hurts to not be able to be loved as u love. But in as much as u ache to love the one you love, you may end up hurting her and hurting yourself more than you'd have imagined if you try to force ur way.. Let her be.. enjoy what you have n the day shall come when your heart shall break no more.. Yea It really felt like you were pouring your heart out on those lines.. great work |
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comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
she breaks my heart each day I interact with her, and she does it on purpose. I keep coming back to get my heart broken. In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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rugged_miss Junior Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 26 |
Do you enjoy being heartbroken? Why do you keep going back to her when you know she deliberately hurts you? Am not accusing you am just asking.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When it comes to love, we can often be "gluttons for punishment". I could feel the authenticity of this emotive write.  EA |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
There is a saying that I abhor because it is so true: "If you do what you alway did, you will get what you always got." Sometimes, those who hurt us will keep us on a string as long as we allow it just for sake of backup so they won't ever have to rely on themselves to deal with situations of their own making alone. It's not fair when they have every intention of handing your heart back in pieces. I wish you a true love. ~ KL |
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comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
wether or not she does it on purpose, I cant help but to love her for it... it provides great inspiration. She is helping me without ever knowing about it. In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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