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I Now Walk With The Wind
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I Now Walk With The Wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Now Walk With The Wind ~*Marge Tindal*~ I, with heady direction, walk into the wind sensing the all of me blowing about Outside in … inside out I walk into the wind, in contemplation of doubt, that I may find the me I’ve been living without The inker of thoughts from this muddle of mind Where is the wind that used to be kind? Steadying my step, I turn, the wind now moves me in earnest yearn once more to find, the wind that knew me … when the wind blew me gently from behind~ Ah, how easy now is my gait to find that the ink of contemplate has patiently waited for me to see the way is now easier, softer...breezier I now walk with the wind~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
MargeTindal- such a lovely write! love to read your poems ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, there is something so special about this poem for me. As a wind lover, and "ink thinker" myself, I can appreciate your words on so many levels. May the winds in your life, be gentle, yet invigorating, ones!   EO |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you both for the gentle read and replies~ I must pop in here to thank my friend, Bruce Adams, for giving me a nudge of inspiration for this piece~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well Marge that walk has certainly inspired you to write beautifully as usual......This is so capturing! Eric |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Having read many of your posts over the years, I have to tell you that this is indeed my favorite of all time. I love poems about the wind, as they always take my mind off to the wind and Willow. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Marge, As usual, your name beside the title proves to be a good read. "late" |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
It takes so long to learn to walk with the wind. This is a great piece of work, Marge. God bless, Rae |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand title! And, “Where is the wind that used to be kind?(!)” …is quite an important question! I am particularly fond of: “I, with heady direction, walk into the wind sensing the all of me blowing about Outside in … inside out I walk into the wind, in contemplation of doubt, that I may find the me I’ve been living without…” Applause! [I am most glad if an 'inspirational nudge' from this magnificent season did indeed transmit through my humble penning!] ~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Just lovely Marge. May you always have a gentle breeze with which to walk. Love, Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
May you forever walk with the whispering winds dear Marge. This is truly your absolute best!! Love it..love it..love it!! And YOU!! Big hugs~Nancy ~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful thought and reason...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, you know I have always enjoyed reading your poetry. This is beautiful. As always. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis......most definately one of my favorites. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: It sure beats walking "against" it! Love this poem! Love Betty lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL for the kindness of your thoughts on this inspired inking~ It's a GREAT day to be a poetess~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
dear lovely marge- this is very well poem i will say AGAIN! ARCTIC WIND |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Lovely poem dear poetess. Sometime we do have to walk against the wind to get where we are going, but once there we can walk with the wind and let ourselves be taken to that place we dream of...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Marge I think this is my favorite of your poems. Ida |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Marge.. I really, really love this from your quill. The title alone suggests the tranquility elaborated on in the verse. absolutely lovely m'friend.  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write Marge, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing Lindsay |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
I have been away for a while so it is just now that I got the chance to read this poem... It is wonderful, and I am so impressed. It was simply amazing  Thank you... Tears of Sanity~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marge, while reading and deeply enjoying your poem I thought, my oh my, one of her very best. And then I read also the comments and I am happy to see that most of our friends here have felt the same way. A keeper, to enjoy over and over again. Wind is the world's breath, thus it is LIFE. Simply wonderful. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhDearFriends~ How I thank you for letting me share this windy walk with you all~ Most of my life I have felt the gentle wind of push move me along ... sometimes it has been necessary to lean into the wind and try to get to where I was going~ But the sheer beauty of it all has been in the knowledge that the wind moves me the best when I let it ~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've always known you listen to the wind and whatever whispers it shares... it could not find a better companion. *S* This is beautiful, my friend! *S* |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
poetess your work never fails to enchant |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
I know I read this in email, and I thought to reply, but as it takes me so long to get here, I think I did not... I love this Marge it is so you...and so me.... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, I feel connected to that wind, too, so I particularly like this one! *hugs*....jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Heartfelt appreciation to ALL of you for the wonderful comments on this little piece of my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'm glad to see this fine piece return near the top of the 'P.I.P.-land' queue! continuing applause!! |
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