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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-10-26 06:36 AM


illusion
submerged in liquor
dipping digits into the center

the candy maker seduces
with sinful situations
at the ends of tan

contemplation
the physics of elevation
from behind car wash windows

while biting one's lip
and alphabetizing granules
from a flip flop under glass

temptation, enter not my will




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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2007-10-26 06:38 AM


I will not enter temptation

ooh could I tempt you Mr Daark?  enjoyed this work of yours... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2007-10-26 06:50 AM


ms R & B..you are such a naughty girl..thank you ms
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-10-26 08:03 AM


I see temptation is not confined to mosey town reverbs ... haha!

Your highly impactful words, dear D., are simply perfect for a morning meditation.

Temptation, enter not my will.  ... love the change you chose to make ... et ne nos inducas in tentationem!

Those candy makers know their job well, better be well equipped!


Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-10-26 04:38 PM


ms mar, walking by the shop makes me want to step in and taste..but then I know I would be addicted..thanks ms
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2007-11-05 03:33 PM


ahhhh...now one lil nibble couldn't hurt could it dark daddy?  
The Lady
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6 posted 2007-11-05 06:39 PM



stranger darlin'
you know how you love temptation

bel1e
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7 posted 2007-11-05 07:04 PM


to our delight, you are just off the hook...lol


~beLLe

     

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8 posted 2007-11-05 07:24 PM


Sir Daark,  you are the master...I bow
humbly.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-11-06 06:19 AM


ms gs, thank you

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ladyone, thank you for the eyes

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bel1e, thanks dark daughter

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magnus, thank you sir

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