| Open Poetry #41 |
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Takadachi Bridge |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan
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. Slowly One by one Without comment The leaves fall Through still air Perhaps The last Dragonfly Equally silent Shimmers from withered Reed to reed The smoke From a pipe Rises up Dissipates Then drifts away Like the sunlight Quiet That feels no need It is over What else is there to say . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...I told a guy at work that the other day when he stepped out of line with a negative comment...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
if let dream ride on the leaves and heart deeply buried with the seeds |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
For me, this is grand-fine minimalistic (American) Zen poetry! serious, sustained applause!! |
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