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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Autumn she flows like smoke memory smell laced wind maple, elm, and oak of nail painted earth tones drying against the breeze dressing up for her fall "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Helen.. this is quite lovely! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the smell of fall on the runners trail sunday morning shuffle, the earth is damp and pungent with the seasons of leaves that that form autumns alter thanks for the inspirational fall setting  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
What can beat this? You brought on the see and feel and smell of it all. Thanks, "late" |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
These words fall delightfully |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"dressing up for her fall" beautiful Helen and oh the pain in this line |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Autumn wears the beauty of the earth in her colors and smile. Reminds me of my grand daughter, Autumn. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely poem with a very clever closing line. "dressing up for her fall" May your autumn be a joyful one!  EA  |
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