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Open Poetry #41

Forever Be

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-10-17 06:48 AM

Forever Be

First time I saw her face
I was as positive
as an image etched
into a negative
that I would desire
to see her face
over and over again.

And then I kissed her lips,
and her kisses branded me
into ecstasy, and within
my heart I knew how precious
she could become to me,
and soon enough she would
forever be the woman
that I love.

JamesLee
17October
2007

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-10-17 08:45 AM

James.... you just know how to put the right words together! I love this! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-10-17 09:17 AM

"branded me
into ecstasy"

I like that particularly, James!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-10-17 10:20 AM

I really enjoy when you write about kisses...makes me smile

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-10-17 03:53 PM

Thank you Roniece, Honeybunch and Sea for the wonderful responses...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-10-17 03:58 PM

romantic poem

love it

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-10-18 02:53 PM

Thank you Artic Wind for the nice response...James

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