Open Poetry #41 |
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Immortal Beloved or "Unsterbliche Geliebte" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Immortal Beloved or "Unsterbliche Geliebte" Oh how divine she looks sitting in my garden so fine in want of me. In approach of her, she looks heavenly. It is her, oh yes it will always be her, who's affection placed a smile upon my face, this fair woman of grace that has time and again made me happy, no even more than that, she is the one that has made me supremely happy. Within the softness of her lips, the passion of her kiss, in the sweet sensuality that she has graced me to know, within these moments of intimacy she has inspired my love to grow. If not for her what would I have to live for, but my music, my blessed gift of music. For music is my life, and music is why she first came to me, to sit in my company, to partake of the fruits of my talent. And these fruits, precious gifts from a God that must truly love me, that brought this angel to me, to tend to me, to keep me company, to be the object of my inspiration and the recipient of my love and affection. And for those that would care to know why, these are the reasons why I call her my angel, for angels only come once in a lifetime, and now I am hers and this angel is mine. "I love you my angel divine." JamesLee 12October 2007 Good morning, on July 7 Though still in bed, my thoughts go out to you, my IMMORTAL BELOVED, now and then joyfully, then sadly, waiting to learn whether or not fate will hear us- I can live only wholly with you or not at all- Yes, I am resolved to wander so long away from you until I can fly to your arms and say that I am really at home with you, and can send my soul enwrapped in you into the land of spirits- Yes, unhappily it must be so- You will be the more contained since you know my fidelity to you. No one else can possess my heart-never-never- Oh God, why must one be parted from one whom one so loves. And yet my life in V is now a wretched life- Your love makes me at once the happiest and the unhappiest of men- At my age I need a steady, quiet life- can that be so in our connection?..(excerpt)...Ludwig van Beethoven, 1812, 42 years old...an impassioned letter to his Immortal Beloved. [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (10-12-2007 09:22 AM).] |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
Why may I ask, out of curiosity, is the alternate title in german? warrior undefeated |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Because Ludwig van Beethoven was German and he wrote those lines in German. And it is exactly this title of course, dear James, that I was immediately attracted to and I sigh and I think how beautiful my mother tongue is "Unsterbliche Geliebte" it sounds so good to my ears. And your words, dear James, are equally passionate and truly beautiful and sensual! My compliments. Love, Margherita |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
I see. well...sehr gut, Schones schreiben. warrior undefeated |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Warrior Bristo and Margherita for the wonderful responses, and thank you Margherita for the explanation that explains the reason perfectly...it is only to see those words as they were originally written...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh James your work tugs at my heart beautiful... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lady for a wonderful response...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
wonderful read James ! ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Artic Wind for the nice response...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
super good. This is not your average romantic poem. This is super wonderful. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sie schrieben ein wundervolles Gedicht James JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
touches ones soul with light~warms ones heart with music a song of eternal love reunites souls this night~ My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Tom, vandana, JL and MGROVES for the wonderful responses...James |
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