Open Poetry #41 |
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Marie Chantal... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia ![]() |
Some words about my lovely French friend who is sick of living in Paris... I would gladly swap with her! RDB Marie Chantal... Drops by to say 'bonjour' She wears large round glasses And tee shirts with slogans That aren't quite true Her face always carries a smile She is loud and funny She is soft and sad She says she wants to leave Paris She says she needs the mountains To help her breathe I think... she just needs some love I think... her woman strength will see her thru She is a french woman after all! [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (10-16-2007 10:50 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah yes...at least one in Paris is itching to get out...and then there will be a little more room for all those desiring to get in...but perhaps all she needs is a week in the mountains, and she will miss her Paris...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you my sweet James for your comment... of course if she does leave then I will be the first on the list to take her place!! You of course can come visit any time! ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I visualize a painting...a work of art come to life in your words. Robert |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce, This tells a true story well. Every urban person has spells when they want to get away. However, they get over it. Bobby |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"She wears large round glasses And tee shirts with slogans That aren't quite true" outstanding work Roniece, my friend |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Roniece, I can picture Marie Chantal as though she were sitting across from ~ thanks to your descriptive writing. I can even see the longing in her face ~ mind you, her expressive eyes are hidden by those big round glasses! lol I do so enjoy reading your memoirs of France and your friends. ![]() Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-16-2007 11:35 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Love france i am sure there is a enought room for both of you! LOL AU REVOIR! ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write'! Applause!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you all for your lovely comments, I'm still suffering from PPD (post paris depression!)... it's nice that I can at least write about my friends there.. thank you again... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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SouthernJustice Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159 |
Kinda like a hip mona lisa i envision. Enjoyed. Southern Justice. PS I am a fan of the DaVinci Code |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Roniece Sydney is not a bad spot but if you really want a change why not come down to Melbourne, it's better than Paris and definately more friendly. Nice post Roniece I enjoyed it. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thanks SJ ![]() Lindsay... I love Melbourne!!! though the weather can be a little bit strange! ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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