Open Poetry #41 |
Price of a Pulpit |
Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
Man in his ignorance beats on man With a baton of religion and of faith. The prophet’s word sets within their eyes a beam And they reason in the mote a thing to hate. “Bury all the sinners in a wasters grave; Cover them with lime and shallow clay; Plant them at a crossroad let no marker stand To send them sharp and godless on their way.” Man in his fury brings cold steel to bone Builds racks to stretch the heathen wretch For happenstance and nothing more Than being there – for difference Bury all the sinless in a wasters grave Cover them with lime and shallow clay Plant them at a crossroads let no marker stand To send them quick and godly on their way. |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
This is an interesting read. I like the cadence. The last lines in S2 and S4 lose me. "sharp" sounds good in the line, but what is the metaphor? This seems to be ambiguous. Whose way and which way. If it is the Godly's way, how does "no marker" direct them? Does this mean, the Godly, with "no marker" of the former sinners path will stay on the proper one? |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
Bronzeage, During the witch-hunts in the UK they buried witches in unconsecrated ground, normally at a crossroads, seemingly so that the soul of the witch didn’t know which way to go of it ever rose from the grave. Lime was used in shallow burials to dampen the stench and promote the decomposition of the corpse and no gravestone or marker was allowed The same treatment was afforded to anyone deemed ‘ungodly’. http://www.answers.com/topic/crossroad quote: Sharp = Quick but sounded more painful 'The' should have been 'them' - I fixed the typo "There's a blaze of light in every word it doesn't matter which you heard the holy or the broken Hallelujah" Leonard Cohen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for sharing this historical anecdote, and for elaborating on the specifics of such cruel inhumane treatment given humans. Judging by the general state of the world today though, we don't seem to have crawled far from the gutter yet. |
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