Open Poetry #41 |
My Sweet Bobbi Lee (edited) |
Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? We'll run away from here To a house made of bricks, and pink swizzle sticks And a door of cotton candy, so sheer My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? A rainbow of Skittles awaits We'll suck lollipops and dine on gumdrops And eat the red licorice plates My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? And fly over the lemony sun Our stomachs might ache, if we have too much cake But I promise it'll be worth the fun My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? And drink from the raspberry stream We’ll frolic and play, at Hershey Bar Way And sleep on clouds of whipped cream My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? And see the animal cracker zoo Caramel squares and brown teddy bears Are waitin' there just for you My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? And skip jelly beans from the dock We'll watch the sun dapple, on each candied apple And I'll make you a tootsie roll frock My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? And climb over the ice cream slope Butterscotch swirls, and praline whirls And marshmallow minis, I hope My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? And dive into the milkshake pool I'll give you the ring, I took from the king But you'll still be the brightest jewel My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me? If so, then please tell me when Its already noon, and I have to go soon But will you marry me, when we turn ten? |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jess...Cute, enjoyed. Makes me want some sweets this morning. Loved the ending...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Golly gee, I'd marry thee! ~ But I doubt that it would be good for my wsistline! lol A precious, precious write! EA |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
how absolutely, positively adorable! what a way to brighten my morning ~Sheli~ By words the mind is winged |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very cute poem, thanx Jess. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww...this is one of the cutest (sweetest) poems I've read in a long long time |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
I like this piece, fun and playful. |
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