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Jess
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0 posted 2007-07-21 03:49 AM


My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
We'll run away from here
To a house made of bricks, and pink swizzle sticks
And a door of cotton candy, so sheer

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
A rainbow of Skittles awaits
We'll suck lollipops and dine on gumdrops
And eat the red licorice plates

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
And fly over the lemony sun
Our stomachs might ache, if we have too much cake
But I promise it'll be worth the fun

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
And drink from the raspberry stream
We’ll frolic and play, at Hershey Bar Way
And sleep on clouds of whipped cream

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
And see the animal cracker zoo
Caramel squares and brown teddy bears
Are waitin' there just for you

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
And skip jelly beans from the dock
We'll watch the sun dapple, on each candied apple
And I'll make you a tootsie roll frock

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
And climb over the ice cream slope
Butterscotch swirls, and praline whirls
And marshmallow minis, I hope

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
And dive into the milkshake pool
I'll give you the ring, I took from the king
But you'll still be the brightest jewel

My sweet Bobbi Lee, would you marry me?
If so, then please tell me when
Its already noon, and I have to go soon
But will you marry me, when we turn ten?



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1 posted 2007-07-21 07:50 AM


Jess...Cute, enjoyed. Makes me want some sweets this morning. Loved the ending...Paul

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2 posted 2007-07-21 09:59 AM


Golly gee, I'd marry thee! ~ But I doubt that it would be good for my wsistline! lol

A precious, precious write!


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3 posted 2007-07-21 10:01 AM


how absolutely, positively adorable!
what a way to brighten my morning

~Sheli~

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~Aristophanes~

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4 posted 2007-07-21 10:24 AM


A very cute poem,  thanx Jess.
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5 posted 2007-07-21 10:29 AM


awwww...this is one of the cutest (sweetest) poems I've read in a long long time
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6 posted 2007-07-22 05:09 AM


Nice writing...James
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7 posted 2007-07-22 05:33 PM


I like this piece, fun and playful.
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