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Open Poetry #41

The Sea, My Heaven

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

0 posted 2007-10-13 01:00 AM

The Sea, My Heaven

It loves me,
But perhaps too much
It draws me in,
But if I dare let myself
Be lead too far,
It will kill me
it will cling tightly to my soul
And not let go until I have no
Choice but to shed my earthly
Body to the depths,
Then shall I live forever
In it's loving embrace
Existing in an everlasting dream
Never to awaken from it's
Mystic pesistence
Never to be abandoned
Or left to fend for myself against
Desperate evil hunting for
Helpless souls
Completely engulfed
In it's emence love
Free and careless
I shall experience
Eternal happiness
Death may be unfortunate to
One of sin and evil,
But fortunate be the death of
One of pure heart
For they shall experience
True happiness
Fortunate death may be for me,
But my destiny forbids it
Not before I've
Played out my role
And my time is finaly spent
May I return once more
And forever
To the sea

warrior undefeated

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2007-10-13 03:28 AM

This is beautiful, Warrior Bristo. I am very relieved at your ending, and that you will not take your own life, and that you intend to play your part in the world.

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-10-13 11:09 AM

It is a fantastic write, I'm also very much captivated by the Sea.

Love,
Margherita

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

3 posted 2007-10-13 12:22 PM

Wow what a great poem you have written here!
With a little help we all have the forgiveness that it takes to enjoy the bliss. I once told someone I wanted to be "buried "or at least tossed into the Mississippi river by the ferry landing at the foot of Canal street at high noon. Iwould be curious to see just where I would travel to.
again I enjoyed this one very much
adagio

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