Open Poetry #41 |
Press your smile on mine! |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Detail of Gustav Klimt's "The Kiss" * * * Press your smile on mine … then slowly let it die passion wears a different face close your eyes and glide along the quicksilver pace of your heart and your mind. Breathe and let your blood race feel it gush through your veins lose track of your thoughts untie yourself from restraint slip into freedom’s domain I am ready for the journey, see together we are taking flight. Up to the moon and beyond at ultrasound speed we move Universe watches our dance with its many discreet eyes. We drift within spirals of light entwined in a divine embrace. The sound of our joint voices, in our very own song of songs, reaches far into the cosmic depth and echoes without end making all the souls long to sing and dance along. And now my sweet Angel recover your charming smile for it nurtures and calms me in the time of in between. And soon enough I’ll ask you again … to press your smile on mine … * * * |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Press your smile on mine" Margherita, I shall never forget that line! ~ and may use it myself, if you don't mind, the next time I am wanting a kiss! Loves 'n smiles! Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful flow of romantic words...James |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
This was a good poem. I like the opening line as well |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An eternal cosmic kiss! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very poetic poem OF COURSE LOL ENJOYED ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, this is such a lovely slice of tender..well done |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I would love to hear this in voice~~ lovely M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Press your smile on mine … then slowly let it die passion wears a different face" powerful beginning to an amazing poem beautiful Margherita |
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