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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197
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In the darkness you sit and cry for dawn’s arrow to pierce the sky, but never strike the flint on steel to flame the tinder to reveal a man hidden in midnight blue, and his hands which reach out for you. There is true word in all my verse for a blessing to end the curse. As well in the dark I may sit, but I know how your candle's lit. A candle bright is burning fast, the night is long but will it last? The answer sought always depends on candles burning from both ends. [This message has been edited by Bronzeage (07-22-2007 05:12 PM).] |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Nice! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"a man hidden in midnight blue, and his hands which reach out for you" really like this  |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
*smile* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I know this candle!!! Nice write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"There is true word in all my verse for a blessing to end the curse." ~ So mote it be!  I've been known to burn the candle at both ends, myself! It doesn't last as long ~ but it sure burns brightly! Love & Candle Light, EA  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
incredible !!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful read! I'll be looking for more from your pen. |
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StormyB Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 42Ohio Usa |
*The answer sought always depends on candles burning from both ends* perfectly written |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The truth burned brightly here, and I found myself seeking enlightenment. The highest compliment one could pay, is the re-read. Thanks for sharing this. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
The candle burns, in the window bright, leading you home, through darkened night, Oh man of midnight blue, end the curse of heart, only one flame burns true, the ending is just the start.... ~ARH |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bronzeage...Amazing write, throughly enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh my. This is outstanding! Patricia |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Wow, I am sure glad that I did not miss this prime piece. It made me think of many nights that I, too, have burned the candle at both ends. Good writing poet. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Nice musical read with a message. MoonShadow . |
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