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Open Poetry #41

The Sea Beckons

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

0 posted 2007-10-09 10:40 PM

The sea beckons me
It summons my breath
And whispers the whims
Of my heart's true creed

The tide reaches out
Slips lightly away
Serenity comes
And absence of doubt

warrior undefeated

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2007-10-09 11:50 PM

A very pretty and peaceful poem~~
Hugs,
Ethel

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

2 posted 2007-10-09 11:58 PM

hey, quick question for anyone out there... How do you get the ranks and the star thingies.

warrior undefeated

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-10-10 02:26 AM

Yes, the sea does that and more. Enjoyed! Welcome to Pip!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2007-10-10 09:44 AM

Beautifully expressed and I agree , I often relax and unwind beside the sea

Hope

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-10-10 10:27 AM

succinct and effective!...a fine 'write'!

serious applause!!

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