Open Poetry #41 |
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Only for me |
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Abena Williams Junior Member
since 2007-10-08
Posts 25England |
I can see your warm smile on that handsome face, I can feel your soft lips in that loving embrace, I can sense your heart melt as our bodies draw near, I can smell your scent as you whisper in my ear, I want our feelings aired for all to see And yet these memories are only for me. AW [This message has been edited by Abena Williams (10-09-2007 11:34 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Abena~ And lovely 'memories' they are~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sometimes 'tis true...but others --- well, that's what makes days brighter... jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Change the first line to say on her beautiful face, and it reminds me of a phone conversation I had with my honey yesterday...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done~~ M |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
warm and romantic as by fire light. ![]() warrior undefeated |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very personal...finely romantic 'write'! applause!! |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
This was nice. A simple but very enjoyable poem |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very romantic. I enjoyed reading. Hugs, Ethel |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Romantic indeed. Ida |
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Hudson New Member
since 2007-10-10
Posts 2 |
What a beautiful poem, so romantic. Reminds me of a simular situation. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's nice to eavesdrop to such delightful romantic talk! Love, Margherita ... and welcome to Pip! |
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Abena Williams Junior Member
since 2007-10-08
Posts 25England |
Hello to you all, Once again, thank you for all your warm comments. It is very much appreciated. Abena x |
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