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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2007-10-08 06:07 PM



Melville may have had it right about True Places
And how they are never put down on any map

Certainly, no “X” marks the old oak where a young man
May have sat in a lap of roots, his back and shotgun, both
Leaned against an august trunk
The wind, sky and November sun telling him that within
The hunt, killing was the least of it

No atlas exists of the ethereal world of color and space
Texture and shape, where a very few, the unique, the mad
Have found possibility able to condense and become
In the short distance between the brush and the canvas
A strident, urgent presence needing birthed

Or this rough cabin, where my own white whale swims free
Able, always, to avoid the sharp stab and capture by my pen


© Copyright 2007 E.F.Rose - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-10-08 06:08 PM


Unique

very Well done

i really thought it was unique !

ARCTIC WIND

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2007-10-08 07:08 PM


K O O L!!!
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2007-10-09 01:23 PM


mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...you!

I miss you so much. *pout* (This guy just talks like this, folks.)

You are one of the wisest poets I know here. You never did assume a voice, just kept your own, and you surprise, even me, who has come to expect the unexpected from you.

Now, I'll try to get back to my own whale hunt--in a pirogue!

thwack  thwack thwack

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-10-09 07:56 PM


Able, always, to avoid the sharp stab and capture by my pen~~~


well I am glad you shared your pen with us~~


M

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
5 posted 2007-10-09 11:10 PM



"The wind, sky and November sun telling him that within
The hunt, killing was the least of it"


Much truth in this.


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