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Until The Glare Meets You In Your Eyes
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Until The Glare Meets You In Your Eyes |
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sweetbomb Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48Canada |
Until The Glare Meets You In Your Eyes Put on your sneaky suit, blow it up Bounce around on your head Until you remember to put lead Between your rubbery toes. Turn on the pinstripes blindingly Light up a harbour as your pass by Until the glare meets you in your eyes Under your red, runny nose. The next corner has your name on it If the wind is right to blow you that way Until then you can hang out blob in the sky You used to be such an interesting guy. De Anna Lane Aston copyright 2007 |
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| © Copyright 2007 De Anna Lane Aston - All Rights Reserved | |||
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wow, powerful! I guess this must have been very cathartic for you to write. I hope it helps you heal! Wishing you happiness. - Owl |
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sweetbomb Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48Canada |
Thank you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Impressive! Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done, my friend...enjoyed both reads! Loved the way you put it...different, yet covered the subject well... jwesley |
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