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Each Day I Love You More
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Each Day I Love You More |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Each Day I Love You More When I walk beside the ocean The mind tends to ponder True what they say of absence Making a heart grow fonder As the waves flow in repetition Upon the vast ocean blue Here I sat for awhile pondering My thoughts turned to you Gazing out upon the open sea I placed a shell to my ear I miss the sound of your voice Wishing you could be here Still feeling you close to heart As the waves lap the shore There is no doubt in my mind Each day I love you more Hope©2007 |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very lovely write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hope, this is just beautiful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The longing is deeply felt, dear Hope. A very beautiful write and "each day I love you more" is a perfect affirmation. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know this feeling...James |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
this is so sweet I loved every word Krysti |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"As the waves flow in repetition Upon the vast ocean blue Here I sat for awhile pondering My thoughts turned to you Gazing out upon the open sea I placed a shell to my ear I miss the sound of your voice Wishing you could be here " Very nice. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
AWWWW! that is very Beautiful I really enjoy reading your poems, exspecailly this one i have just posted my second poem, and i am so happy. i thought of different poets when i posted it, including you!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'High' Hope!  I found the following stanza especially tender: Gazing out upon the open sea I placed a shell to my ear I miss the sound of your voice Wishing you could be here Loving hug, Linda |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hope, True beauty echoes in every line of this. Simply magical! Take care, Amy "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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ameteurpoet101 Junior Member
since 2007-09-24
Posts 18The island of sunshine, Jamaica |
Oh wow this is very sweet and comforting |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
awwwwww. somebody is lucky... wherever they are |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I dont know if i already replied to this poem but great job ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sending this one to my mother, my friend...know she'll enjoy it... j. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Another beautiful poem Hope, keep up the good writing, thoroughly enjoyed it. Lindsay |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
I know this longing feeling all too well warrior undefeated |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, this is so pretty. I really loved it. You write such beautiful poems. Hugs, Ethel |
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