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passing through with no hands to hold on
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passing through with no hands to hold on |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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blossom into the begining of a phase. the moon, piled, brutal weght, crushing the years passing through intelectual self-delusion. why not emotions... why not taste of lust for a change... why malfunction in times when glipmse controls the sight... before the Field of ends some moments belong to the Full constantly twisting for disguise. malignant mind flees still aware, but weak more and more nobody's. no skin can hide outside it. and peace... silence reaches when frozen laughter is preserved. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There are some truly impressive lines, dear Pandonov. It is complex, reflecting youth's ponderings. quote: Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"before the Field of ends some moments belong to the Full" Petre, I enjoyed reading this insightful write, and am left thinking especially about the above line. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
crushing the years passing through intelectual self-delusion. This is my favorite line... awesome write.  SauniSauni:) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Such excellence and beauty wrapped around swings from power to powerlessness. Well done. I wish you happiness and contentment. - Owl |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thank you all |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"passing through with no hands to hold on" ~ a very intriguing title! Enjoyed the entire poem, however, when I came to the closing lines, they were the clincher! "and peace... silence reaches when frozen laughter is preserved." I appreciate your style of writing ~ and your thoughts! Hugs to you, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
YES VERY! interesting ARCTIC WIND |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have read many wonderful pieces by you but this one just leaves me speechless, for many reasons. I keep going back to highlight the parts that stand out to me, but the entire piece just grabs me...again, for so many reasons. The layers in this write are incredible and captivating. Brava sir...simply BRAVA!! "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thank you all  |
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