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Open Poetry #41

Life’s Hour Glass

StormyB
Junior Member

since 2007-07-18

Posts 42
Ohio Usa

0 posted 2007-07-21 04:12 PM

So many words so little time to get all out and place in rhyme..
Pressure….
Doesn’t look to good on me.
Too many thoughts swirling around,
get a pen and write them down..
Insanity…
is for choosing not to see.
Not all feelings bring us pain,
but cry when happy just the same,
The river….
of emotions can run deep.
Clock still ticking out of time
The perfect words get hard to find
The pages…
are getting harder now to see,
Bright white light…
Extended hand…
Leads you to the promised land..
A survivor…
from the realm of humanity.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-07-21 04:54 PM

love this

"Not all feelings bring us pain,
but cry when happy just the same,
The river….
of emotions can run deep."

really like this part

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2007-07-21 05:34 PM

One could liken this too a whirlpool,
swirling and sometimes changing direction
and never ending until some unforseen force
jumps in and breaks the motion....

Yes, poetry can be this way...but so much
fun when you write something really good.

StormyB
Junior Member

since 2007-07-18

Posts 42
Ohio Usa

3 posted 2007-07-21 08:32 PM

Thankyou for your comments, they are appreciated.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-07-21 09:18 PM

I saw you in announcements, so I came looking for you and glad I did

this is a wonderful poem!

hope to read more!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2007-07-21 09:20 PM

good read

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